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Here is the breed sheet of my species, the dracowolves.
Wanna know something about their history? Read it here:
History:
Hundred years ago there live dragons over all. They fly around and hunt what they can hunt. But then, one day, the dragons who live hundreds of years decimate their number. Many dragons died because of an unknown disease. All dragons was shocked, because there are no female dragons, they were never born. So, the male dragons searched over the land to find a species which has a similar gene-material like theirs. One day they found them: the wolves.
After they found them, the dragons raped the female wolves and put their genes into them. The genes are mixed now, to create a new species, to preserve the dragon's genes.
After all dragons died and the dracowolves are spreaded over the land, they began to develop every years a little.
And today, they have their own elements, every dracowolf their own. These elements show every pack from which gene material their blood is, from which dragon they descend.
The runes arise by an age from 14, in teenager years, where they have to learn what their element means and to learn more about it. In this time, the teenies are very aggressive.
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damasath Me, please ask and link me the one you created. :)
FOR QUESTIONS YOU CAN ALSO ASK ME. :)
# I know, my grammar is not perfect.
<b>BIGGER FILE: http://damasath.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d54rx2e and klick "download"</B>
Wanna know something about their history? Read it here:
History:
Hundred years ago there live dragons over all. They fly around and hunt what they can hunt. But then, one day, the dragons who live hundreds of years decimate their number. Many dragons died because of an unknown disease. All dragons was shocked, because there are no female dragons, they were never born. So, the male dragons searched over the land to find a species which has a similar gene-material like theirs. One day they found them: the wolves.
After they found them, the dragons raped the female wolves and put their genes into them. The genes are mixed now, to create a new species, to preserve the dragon's genes.
After all dragons died and the dracowolves are spreaded over the land, they began to develop every years a little.
And today, they have their own elements, every dracowolf their own. These elements show every pack from which gene material their blood is, from which dragon they descend.
The runes arise by an age from 14, in teenager years, where they have to learn what their element means and to learn more about it. In this time, the teenies are very aggressive.
SPECIES ©
damasath Me, please ask and link me the one you created. :)FOR QUESTIONS YOU CAN ALSO ASK ME. :)
# I know, my grammar is not perfect.
<b>BIGGER FILE: http://damasath.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d54rx2e and klick "download"</B>
Category All / All
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The runes are the most important thing on a dracowolf. The runes are the element of the dracowolves and determine their properties.
The runes are the most important thing on a dracowolf, because they symbolize their element and/or determine their properties.
Runes are divided into different characteristics. Main characteristics are: Elemental and Physical
There are two main forms of runes, Elemental runes and [/u]Physical runes[/u]
The elemental runes allow the dracowolf to use the power of nature. The physical one strengthen some physical properties.
An elemental rune allows a dracowolf to use the power of nature, while the a physical rune strengthen the dracowolf.
There are runes which you can see very often, not that often, and some are rare. Few runes are very rare and one element is there what is only one time in the world: The pure element (which is Dhargos' element).
Some runes are more common than others, while a few are very rare anr precious. There is one special rune of which there can only be one in the world at a time; The Pure element rune.
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Made the big block of text up above flow a bit better, and potentially made things easier to understand.
Then again, I might have misunderstood a few things from reading that ^,^''
The runes are the most important thing on a dracowolf. The runes are the element of the dracowolves and determine their properties.
The runes are the most important thing on a dracowolf, because they symbolize their element and/or determine their properties.
Runes are divided into different characteristics. Main characteristics are: Elemental and Physical
There are two main forms of runes, Elemental runes and [/u]Physical runes[/u]
The elemental runes allow the dracowolf to use the power of nature. The physical one strengthen some physical properties.
An elemental rune allows a dracowolf to use the power of nature, while the a physical rune strengthen the dracowolf.
There are runes which you can see very often, not that often, and some are rare. Few runes are very rare and one element is there what is only one time in the world: The pure element (which is Dhargos' element).
Some runes are more common than others, while a few are very rare anr precious. There is one special rune of which there can only be one in the world at a time; The Pure element rune.
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Made the big block of text up above flow a bit better, and potentially made things easier to understand.
Then again, I might have misunderstood a few things from reading that ^,^''
More suggestions:
Race
Dracowolves are mammals and live together in a pack like wolves. They love to hunt and to run. This species got their temper from the blood of their other antecedents, the dragons. Mostly they live in forests, steppes and mountains. To hunt means their food is meat.
Species
Dracowolves are mammals that live and hunt together in a pack like their wolf ancestoy, and got the temper of their other ancestor, the Dragons.
They live mostly around forest, steppes and mountains.
Their main diet is meat.
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Last line could be ignored, as it is implied in the hunting part.
Also, antecedents doesn't mean what you think it means... linked it to a dictionary in the quote above.
Race
Dracowolves are mammals and live together in a pack like wolves. They love to hunt and to run. This species got their temper from the blood of their other antecedents, the dragons. Mostly they live in forests, steppes and mountains. To hunt means their food is meat.
Species
Dracowolves are mammals that live and hunt together in a pack like their wolf ancestoy, and got the temper of their other ancestor, the Dragons.
They live mostly around forest, steppes and mountains.
Their main diet is meat.
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Last line could be ignored, as it is implied in the hunting part.
Also, antecedents doesn't mean what you think it means... linked it to a dictionary in the quote above.
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