It's a good background, but, needs some foreground to it, more to the beginning.

The length of the beginning makes it more like a rave song, though, I'm not sure if that's what you're aiming for. (It takes too long to get to the point of the song.) (I would recommend adding in the tune a little sooner, of mayhaps a little filler earlier.)

It sounds very promising though.

I hope you don't mind the critique.

I especially like it toward the end, with the space like feel.

Nice ending.

The long beginning is intended for DJ's (if they want to transition into this song). I do that with most of my songs. The same goes with the long ending (to transition into a different song). And I was kinda going for the more melodic euro-rave style (kinda like System F), and less mainstream. Thanks for the comment and take care ;)

~Ash

amazing ^w^