Ditch the tail and I think it would look awesome

I think its a good picture :) Would definitely make an awesome t-shirt

I prefer this one

It looks cool. The tail just looks odd. Either make it more prominent against the moon or possibly remove it.

I definitely like this one better. I agree on the tail thing with the above comments.

I think make the tail more prominently higher off the back and put slightly more distance between the ground and the wolf. I also want to say make the ears more prominent because even though it looks like a wolf, the appearance can throw off the impression of a bear.

I like this one. Ready to pounce on ya!

I think the sticker design has more presence and is more universal, therefore may get sales from a broader audience. This design appeals to furrys alone more since he looks ready to pounce and he's hot and muscular.

I'd buy it.

I think this comment is spot on.
As to me I imagine he's pissed because who/whatever made him drag his ass up that cliff and he's going to take it out of sumone's hide...or maybe ass.

I wanna take him home and do many naughty things to him!

looks fantastic to me, i'd buy one

It's good, but seems like he's gonna rape someone. Normally that's no problem, but if you're gonna wear it on shirt, that's a no-no.

For some reason pecs look a bit big, but it looks like a good design.

What exactly do you not like about it?

hard to say...i think you should draw a few more so we can tell for sure.... :)

I like it! I do agree that maybe the tail needs to be repositioned. I would certainly love to get this on a t-shirt for my husband. :D

I like it, I'm not sure I would get it as a shirt necessarily, but I like the image itself.

I like it, but I think it could use a few small tweaks:

1. As others have said, change the tail (probably just drop it). It looks odd covering the moon like that. Alternatively, push the moon up a little higher and only change the tail a little bit. Since the moon as depicted makes a very strong artistic statement, I'd be reluctant to move it, but it is an option if you like that result better.

2. I think the wolf could use a SLIGHT (emphasis on slight!) reduction in muscle tone. And while I'm sure a lot of people are inherently opposed to that, I still think it's artistically appropriate. Wolves, generally speaking, are seen as "lean mean killing machine" kind of creatures, as opposed to the expected beefiness of, say, bears. I think it would help the picture a lot if he slimmed down *a little,* particularly in the foreground arm, going for a more "sinewy" look. The reason I've emphasized "slight" and "a little" is that I know your particular style is full of deliciously muscular men, so there's nothing wrong with the wolf being beefy; I just think that "on the slimmer side of beefy" instead of "on the superbeef side of beefy" is more appropriate for this piece.

3. Getting some color, even simple color, would make a HUGE impact here. Particularly in what color you want the wolf to be: generally I'd recommend dark colors (brown, grey, or black) but with the big ol' moon there, you might want to go for pale-grey or white for him. Ideally, the sky would be a deep, dark blue or indigo, but simple black works fine as well.

4. The 'patches' on the sides of his muzzle look weirdly flat in the sketch as-is. I strongly recommend making some alterations to the face to restore a more three-dimensional look; it won't be easy, due to the sharp angle of the pic, but I think it'd be worth it.

A lot of this you've probably already thought of, being an artist rather than an art-consumer, but I figure it can hurt giving my two bits. :)

I do agree with what he said mostly. Another issue I currently see is that his body has too much contact with the ground, looking like he's hugging the ground rather than crawling on it.

As for sticking with the other design, I guess if you plan on making an 'angry' series and eventually adding more species to it, that would also be wonderful.

I feel like it would fit something other than a shirt better. I can't really think of what though... What I mean is, I REALLY like the image (it reminds me of your old moon wolf pic), but I'm not all that keen on walking around with a naked wolf emblazoned on my chest. Maybe a poster?

The tail looks like a large, weird butt... I'm not sure if this image would look good on a shirt, either, and that's coming from someone who thinks wolves are awesome...

Looking good but where's the poor guy's snout?

I like it, but I would agree that you need to make the tail a bit more pronounced and the ears should be a bit larger and more triangular. Also, what is the deal with his face? I get the muzzle, but the things on the side of his nose kinda looks like tusks. Is it supposed to be open mouth views of his teeth or...? Those few things just look a bit off to me. Good job over all though!

Everyone has mentioned the tail a lot, and I would also mention it as something that needs tweaking. Right now it looks kind of like an extra-poofy butt x3 (no offense meant!), so I would suggest changing the shape or angle of it so it shows as a tail.

I would also suggest making him lurk a bit higher off the ground. He's so low to the ground, he resembles more of a cat or tiger prowling than a wolf. I still say let him be close to the ground, but with a little more space between his chest and the dirt. Or maybe his chest is so beefy it can't help but reach the ground when he crawls, buuuuut that is hard to convey if so. Even if that's pretty hot. :B

By the way, your work stuns and amazes me every time you post a finished piece. I hardly comment, in part because I'm too stunned to have words left, in other part because, well, I never know what i could possibly say to contribute. x3

Wow, I'd buy it, tbh. Maybe a bit more snout and some work on the tail... I still prefer it over the older design tho

I'd agree with above comments that the ears and tail need to be more prominent, and stand up higher above the profile of the body, so there's no confusion about bear/wolf or furrybutt. But seriously I like this one more. Also a little more space between the ground and his body. When he's that low, it says "Submitting" to me.

I agree with you on it needs more work on it. If I was across the room looking at it. I would not know what it was unless I got closer to it.

The face seems not to be the attention of the pic, and a bit small. I think the best way to go is, Foreground hand & fingers planted on the ground grinding in the dirt, as it is pushing up his body up. his other hand is up trailing dirt off it.

Head extended and snarling with drool whipping. Muscles in arms and shoulders bulging as you see them pushing forward in it's leap as the victim.

The legs and tail should be blurred showing the speed of the action.

Sorta like how they would do it as a comic book cover/pin up.

But this is only my point of view of the pic. You always seem to get it right sooner or later.

I think it'd make a great T-shirt. Clean it up, sharpen, maybe splash a bit of color, grey him up and whiten the moon up to be all bright then slap it on the back of a t-shirt.

Or just slap a lion behind him and let it be a nice rump pump O:3

Love it, but I would say two things

Get rid of the leg on the left, bullfrog squat is a weird position

and

Make the tail stick out so you can see the point, right now it doesn't look like a tail.

Other than that, clean it up, stick some kick ass colors like you do on it and go make oodles of money and I'll add it to the list of shirts I'll be buying.

Move the tail and legs. They obstruct the overall silhouette and diminishes the clarity of the upper body. You can either bring him up a little higher to suggest the knees or feet, or make it more subtle.

Play around with the position and size of the moon. It's getting close to doing a tangent on his tush.

Push the proportions, and when you get to refining, play with your shapes for the print. Zoom out as far as you can to see if you still get what's going on. If it's on a T-Shirt, badass ones are instantly recognizable from far away, so make it clear. Add and subtract to see what works best. The muscle tone is good, don't add drool because it may convilute the design, don't blur shit if you're going for a print. You know this, you have impeccable tact!

You have potential with this! I prefer it over the older one, where it feels more static (stable though). This could be very dynamic. Play around with the idea. If you yourself aren't sold with it, stick with the old one. This could be an opportunity to explore!

willer design it really makes him pop

I think it is a good start. You should make the muscles pop more with more and deeper cuts.

I would say both.... >.>

Some t shirt designs? Itd be great for them to exist, since its hard to find some furious pissed off anthros like wolves or dragons >_>

I like this one.

I would get one.. looks cool

I definitely prefer the sticker design. I know there are people who like actual /drawings/ on shirts, but I like simple.

Why not make like a little mixture of the two? Add more to the sticker design, and remove a bit from the shirt design?

it's an idea

looks cute

Woof.
I like this new design.

The sticker one is simpler, and more agresive. And it goes really great along with the Angry Tiger shirt. I like that.

As for this design, the concept of the moon and the hunt/stalk pose looks awesome. I do agree that the tail is not exactly in the best position, it could be changed or removed.

If you make this to have a really mean face I'd say this is the way to go. And would love to have one myself ^^

I prefer this one but I would also think the tail needs a bit of work.

i think he looks sexy/seductive more than angry or scary.

SHIRT! i would buy this in a second!

I think the back paw looks like it's behind his shoulders, and might move it up. I love the "tight" posture that looks predatory. His head maybe should be a little bigger? Maybe it's because it's just lines and I'm on my phone at work and I don't know anatomy? Nor foreshortening?

Love the pose but the angle seems a bit weird to me

fun stuff

I'd definitely like seeing this basic design on a t-shirt. The sticker/decal is sweet too but just doesn't seem like it would be as good a fit for a t-shirt design. =)

love this design. face is a bit small abd tail is a bit odd. you should also look into drawind a wolf with wings (just not in this one)