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Pony Fanfiction. :P
This was a request from my friend. Her birthday is tomorrow and she wanted me to write and interesting and epic Pony story for her. So I hope you enjoy! It's long, but let me know what you think!
I'm not the biggest pony fan, so I know some things may be wrong here and there, but that's okay.
This was a request from my friend. Her birthday is tomorrow and she wanted me to write and interesting and epic Pony story for her. So I hope you enjoy! It's long, but let me know what you think!
I'm not the biggest pony fan, so I know some things may be wrong here and there, but that's okay.
Category Story / Fanart
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File Size 68.5 kB
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You don't know how relieved I was to hear that it was not Discord. The next story I'm working on involves Discord doing something very similar. But enough about me; I think your story captured the epic feel pretty nicely. I have one logic hole to poke in it though. If the moon could not rise, how could the sun possibly rise? Throwing aside that little nuanse though, I think it was worth the read. I hope your friend enjoyed it.
You don't know how relieved I was to hear that it was not Discord. The next story I'm working on involves Discord doing something very similar. But enough about me; I think your story captured the epic feel pretty nicely. I have one logic hole to poke in it though. If the moon could not rise, how could the sun possibly rise? Throwing aside that little nuanse though, I think it was worth the read. I hope your friend enjoyed it.
Hahha, yeah. I had thought of involving him on the side, but I figured that she was good enough.
Well, Luna wasn't captured until the morning and Celestia was still allowed to move. I'm not too learned in the series if it takes a lot of magic to make the sun/moon rise. XD
Thanks for the comment though! I am very glad you enjoyed it. :D
Well, Luna wasn't captured until the morning and Celestia was still allowed to move. I'm not too learned in the series if it takes a lot of magic to make the sun/moon rise. XD
Thanks for the comment though! I am very glad you enjoyed it. :D
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