1 of point: I haven't talked to you in forever :(

I liked the bit about adapting to a scar in the mirror and I like the way you humanize god as flawed.
However it was very detached and kind of vague

also, yura brony! :O

I know, i keep meaning to get back up with you, we have a lot of catching up to do xD

it really is super detached. like more than i could have done if i was trying, don;t really know why either
i guess that's what happens when you write something in the last 10 minutes of your deadline based off of a line i liked form an episode of doctor who i haven't written in forever, but i's coming back to me

and lastly, extremely so.