Once again, redrafting for submission this friday; I made subtle changes.
Any ideas, comments?
Any ideas, comments?
Category Poetry / All
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Kia...
The wonder, the beauty and the utter pain one who is a Dragon must feel. To be honored, praised and then cursed and hunted by the same beings tells a history that not many can ever attest. The true sin does not lie within the Dragons soul or life but surrounds those who do not understand and are not willing to learn or behold truth. One should not have to change to be more like a standard that others have created. Difference, difference in all, is what makes this world worth living.
Your words here contain a strength I will carry within and hold close. If ever to meet in this life or another, the one who only wishes to be forgiven because of how he/she was created, I now know I will have the ability to face and comfort one who should not need to ask.
You are showing your greatness in this most wonderful piece of art. Absolutely a favorite and should be for all who read.
Take care,
Tye
The wonder, the beauty and the utter pain one who is a Dragon must feel. To be honored, praised and then cursed and hunted by the same beings tells a history that not many can ever attest. The true sin does not lie within the Dragons soul or life but surrounds those who do not understand and are not willing to learn or behold truth. One should not have to change to be more like a standard that others have created. Difference, difference in all, is what makes this world worth living.
Your words here contain a strength I will carry within and hold close. If ever to meet in this life or another, the one who only wishes to be forgiven because of how he/she was created, I now know I will have the ability to face and comfort one who should not need to ask.
You are showing your greatness in this most wonderful piece of art. Absolutely a favorite and should be for all who read.
Take care,
Tye
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