This is a revisit to one of my poems, i changed a few elements, some of the rhyme, added some words and made a few changes to the previous version of the poem, I Am What I Eat.

I am going to be submitting up to ten works of poetry to the Watershed project, a book edited and put together by CSU Chico, its one of the oldest running student created compiled works of student art/literature. I really hoping to have some of my work shown in Watershed, since this will be my last year as a student, and possibly my only chance to submit.

On that note, please leave me feedback, do you like the changes to the poem, do you dislike the changes should i stick with the original, any suggestions or critiques i will also take into consideration before i submit. Thank you for your help!