Hi hi^^how're you all?sorry for the big delay(again) with pics. But here is my part of an art trade with
zanten94
The main idea was him sitted at his house,calling somebody to watch tv,but while coloring,i though that could be better if he was outside.Then i used the grass brush,and made a cloud brush using the filter,and then it happened.The teddy bear brush i found at internet a long time ago
It was better than i expected...
Things i need to improve:
-Plushies
-Wings
Hope you like it buddy
zanten94The main idea was him sitted at his house,calling somebody to watch tv,but while coloring,i though that could be better if he was outside.Then i used the grass brush,and made a cloud brush using the filter,and then it happened.The teddy bear brush i found at internet a long time ago
It was better than i expected...
Things i need to improve:
-Plushies
-Wings
Hope you like it buddy
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1114 x 1114px
File Size 1.4 MB
That very good. and it nice it came out like this. OK here I going to critic on your work so you can improve on.
1) First is the head it look very funny there as the forehead is strange. To help this you first need to draw the guidlines first. First draw the circle and draw the line indicating where the head and face will go.
2) Wings is fine I also draw that in my first year. To improve on it you need to fine a tutorial on different wings span and how it works.
3) The body and proportion is not good there. I think you need to learn more about the anatomy. here is the picture on how the baby anatomy look like http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7747892/. I not saying you must draw it like this, I showing you how the baby real body look like the drawing is up to you.
4) The arms and hands looks too small. I think practice will do.
5) legs are too long and small they dont look chubby. it look like the he doing kung fu with his body.
Overall: I like it you didnt read the journal carefully when I said you must be more than 3 years experiance skill I mean people who has been drawing for 3 years developing. This look like it been drawing for 2 years now. which is unacceptable and I feel like it done really quickly. I 'm not happy how it came out but it good. If this was taking for more than 5 days then it was done way too quickly. The reason I say for a month is because to give artist the chance to draw something properly and if you have any trouble drawing it then I will accept your reason and you effort for it.
Recommendation: I see you are doing well but you need a lot of practice and I mean alot. Do you ever go through the tutorials or have drawn real life object? If not then you can get a lot of from books and internet and even ask artist where you going wrong with it. It best that you keep practicing one part at the time. once you feel that it looking good then move on to the next part of the drawing.
1) First is the head it look very funny there as the forehead is strange. To help this you first need to draw the guidlines first. First draw the circle and draw the line indicating where the head and face will go.
2) Wings is fine I also draw that in my first year. To improve on it you need to fine a tutorial on different wings span and how it works.
3) The body and proportion is not good there. I think you need to learn more about the anatomy. here is the picture on how the baby anatomy look like http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7747892/. I not saying you must draw it like this, I showing you how the baby real body look like the drawing is up to you.
4) The arms and hands looks too small. I think practice will do.
5) legs are too long and small they dont look chubby. it look like the he doing kung fu with his body.
Overall: I like it you didnt read the journal carefully when I said you must be more than 3 years experiance skill I mean people who has been drawing for 3 years developing. This look like it been drawing for 2 years now. which is unacceptable and I feel like it done really quickly. I 'm not happy how it came out but it good. If this was taking for more than 5 days then it was done way too quickly. The reason I say for a month is because to give artist the chance to draw something properly and if you have any trouble drawing it then I will accept your reason and you effort for it.
Recommendation: I see you are doing well but you need a lot of practice and I mean alot. Do you ever go through the tutorials or have drawn real life object? If not then you can get a lot of from books and internet and even ask artist where you going wrong with it. It best that you keep practicing one part at the time. once you feel that it looking good then move on to the next part of the drawing.
thanks for the critiqs...a bit hard to accept them,but i got it,but with some doubts...
1-This pic isn't a lot different from the sketch i showed to you...Would be really better if you told me the proportion errors BEFORE i started the lineart procedure.That's why i showed the sketch for you.Sorry,but your "Cool,i like it",give me a fake impression.I felt it was good for me,but moved to the next part,just after think that it was good for you too.
2-Mostly of the characters i draw don't have wings,but i know i need to improve
3-I did the guide lines and all.as i said,i don't draw dragons a lot...
4-the pic isn't different from my others pics.I told it to you before we started the Art Trade.I know i have a long way to became an amazing artist like Tavi or Gem,but i'm sure i'm at the right way for it.
Thanks for the critics,and i'm sorry if ya expected something better...
1-This pic isn't a lot different from the sketch i showed to you...Would be really better if you told me the proportion errors BEFORE i started the lineart procedure.That's why i showed the sketch for you.Sorry,but your "Cool,i like it",give me a fake impression.I felt it was good for me,but moved to the next part,just after think that it was good for you too.
2-Mostly of the characters i draw don't have wings,but i know i need to improve
3-I did the guide lines and all.as i said,i don't draw dragons a lot...
4-the pic isn't different from my others pics.I told it to you before we started the Art Trade.I know i have a long way to became an amazing artist like Tavi or Gem,but i'm sure i'm at the right way for it.
Thanks for the critics,and i'm sorry if ya expected something better...
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