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Ruined -- Thursday prompt

By LadyVivamus,
posted 18 years ago Writer

Some things can never be undone.

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poetigress's Thursday Prompt Challenge. The prompt this week: the ruins.

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Metassus ~metassus

Crafter

18 years ago

Nice one, LV. Moving. Personal?

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

Somewhat. Enhanced for the sake of art, you might say.

finalone ~finalone

Writer

18 years ago

Very strong emotion, and good word choice. I liked your discriptions of the ruins alot.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

Thanks... I thought a lot about the setting, and the scene just kind of happened.

TShaw ~tshaw

Writer

18 years ago

You’re able to pull on the emotions quite well here in so short a story, very well done.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

Thanks... this is why most of what I write (to put on here at least) is very short; I love flash fiction.

Kathmandu ~kathmandu

Anthro Semi-Artist

18 years ago

I don't know if I can add to what's already been said but good work.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

Thanks! ^^

Renee Carter Hall ~poetigress

Writer

18 years ago

Nice. I like the descriptions.

vixyyfox ~vixyyfox

Writer

18 years ago

Very well written... but so sad. *holds her fingers from writing past histories... best left alone... 'I'm sorry' and "I forgive you' are so hard to say yes?

*hugs...

V.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

At times, that they are.

*hugs back*

tenza ~tenza

Writer

18 years ago

Wow, this one's touching. I can't say more than what's already been said.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

*hugs*

tenza ~tenza

Writer

18 years ago

You inspired me to do something:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/819619/

TheGru ~thegru

Writer

18 years ago

I caught Tenza's poem before this, but now I wish I read this first, such good descriptive ability, and such a sad theme.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

18 years ago

*blush* Thanks very much!

panzergulo ~panzergulo

Storyteller

17 years ago

Powerful. Sad. Great story, even if utterly sad. Many ruins in this story. Great little piece.

LadyVivamus ~ladyvivamus

Writer

17 years ago

Thank you. :)

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