Nice.^_^ A little rushed at the end and perhaps in need of a spelling and grammatical check, but still quite fun. ^_^ A sequel with even more fattening and gigantic blob sizes would not go amiss I think.

Ahhh, revenge truly is sweet.

An excellent story, true there were a number of spelling and gramatical errors, maybe even a few words missing out-right, wonderous read nonetheless.

you balanced very well the storyline, the complete justification of this lions punishment, the gluttony and it's affects on his belly, the weight gain and it's affect on his physical activity, and...

well I'm sure their were other things which called for my compliments, but in my sleep deprived state I'll simply say bravo good sir and carry on in your ruining of muscle bound figures.

thanks, I know I have big trouble pointing out my own grammar mistakes, I had a friend look it over for me I guess he missed a bit more than I did.

though we were both tired around the time.

Nice story!! I enjoyed it... and an unexpected ending... I hope that leads to a sequel!!

Just wanted to mention that I still hecken' adore this story!! <3

Aw Thanks, your art is adorable.

Aww, thank you!! <3