Hi guys! Just showing some stuff I've been doing from school recently.

We were to illustrate a given sentence. So I chose, "In that moment, the executive knew he had to make a do or die decision..."

Here's what I got called out on -

Vary the ears in some bunnies. Visual interest etc.
Up the size of the arrow - Exaggerate to push the point.
Make the top-bunny not seem so floaty.
Try removing the background bunnies. add more paper for chaos/depth instead.
REMOVE THE RIGHT SUICIDE BUNNY - Apparently my twisted sense of humor went too far this time lol. I LOVE HIM - but my classmates think that little guy makes this "cartoon" go from light and playful - to 21st century. I lol'd really bad xD. They're right though, I can see it being a bit on the hardcore side.

SO - I took most of their advice. I've done a value study, with everything swapped up. I thought clearing the background bunnies would make it too simple - but when I added value, things seemed to fit snugly into place.

May do another WIP soon...

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Biscuit's been kinda on hold. Mainly due to school - I'll be making a journal on this soon - It's not a bad one, in fact it'll have updates regarding donations and more information on the project. The journal (and a little something extra) will be up as soon as I finish the friggin' Title screen LOL.

Anyways.