Lots of power in this one... Nothing much I can say. Passing of a near relative is painful. But, writing does help... even if the result might be a bit... let's say... corny. There are lots of textual works I haven't submitted, as they have been written in very emotional state. Although, some of my best works have been written in a similar state.

Very strong. I liked this part:

"I break my legs to walk my path!..."

Nice metaphor, all six of them. I read the meaning as: You have to relearn to live to be able to continue.

Well written.

Thanks Panzer =3 I can't really say much more but I know I need to sit down and read some of your writtings now even more lol

Nah, you don't have to. I don't believe in dept of commenting. I just decided to take a little tour through your gallery and read and comment, because that is something I can do. I have the rest of your stories in my bookmarks, I try reading them sometime in the near future.