Instrumentation's pretty raw at the moment, but the melody and bassline aren't bad at all, they have a very hypnotic yet actve quality to them. With a bit of extra development instrument-wise there's the potential for some great pieces I think, though it does come down to the software you have at your disposal. A fair start, best of luck with your future works.

Thanks, but the instruments are supposed to have a sort of raw and powerful feel to them. I am not sure how much more I could clean them up without losing that feel.

Hmm... I think you need better samples to work with. :3 The percussion sounds rather bland. Perhaps a slightly more obvious reverb on that really thick saw sound could help a lot in creating space in the song.

And hmm... perhaps a more definite chord progression would really help a lot in this song, I feel the synths are.. kind of going all over the place. The melody is quite interesting though.