>rtf file

nope too lazy

uploading writing is complicated

Save it as a .txt file, if you're not scared of losing a bit of formatting.

open with wordpad. problem solved

woah thank you very much sir I was not aware of how to open a rich text file

you're great with computers you should work at a computer store because you're good with computers

That sounds like great advice ._.

dont forget to delete System32

I read it on fagbook anyway lol

it was horrible and mind numbing and depressing. Fantastic work, 10/10

I... Don't know if there is some weird glitch in my program or not but.. Why are there no quotation marks in your dialogue?

The paragraph format is blocky, and just....



I think I'm the only one with this pet peeve, but I really, really hate reading stories that are double lined, the format that you see in novels... Book Manuscript Format I think it's called... Is much better for me to read because it helps you grasp what is wrong, and what is right in terms of grammar and punctuation.

I do love your writing style though, your diction is very good, the atmosphere and tone of the story is also great.

I intentionally didn't put quotes. They'd just clutter it up.

And thanks!

I haven't really come up with an interpretation, because I haven't been able to read it in depth. I was too confused in what is dialogue, thought, afterthought, or what have you.

Goddamnit I love your writing.

This was a treat for me.

Thank you.

Reminds me of absurdist fiction.

I interpret it as the main character in a dreamy state of unconsciousness, and having a conversation with himself. He doesn't remember anything because he's just been in a car crash with his wife and daughter. The waiters are actually his wife, who is with him all the times during his state, and he doesn't recognize his daughter because she's nowhere near him, or, as a more out-there interpretation, she wasn't a big factor in his life.

Then again, it could just be my imagination and Buckley's acting up on me.