OOoooOOooo Reallyyy like this one~

Sounds pretty good, but you do need to work on the vocals and the mix a little bit. Vocal track is too loud compared to everything else, and the recording sounds nasally. This is either due to a filter setting, or you are singing through your nose... make sure you aren't using your nose when you sing this. Also, some of the notes a little shaky, try pushing with your diaphragm while singing so it's more solid and stable.

As I said, this sounds pretty good, and you have room to grow too, so that's a good thing :3

Haha I am working on it to the best of my ability. But I don't think my 10 dollar microphone wants to agree with me much.

Also I was trying to almost whisper because it was I think like... 3 am when I was recording? So I guess that explains the nasal sounding voice. and no retakes on recording because I couldn't understand some of the sections while it was playing with the music (crappy Cpu drive on my computer :p )

But yeah, I'm working on it! :3

I understand, I'm just trying to help you by telling you things I've been told and have grown from, just trying to help ^.^' Ah, I see. I saved up money from mowing lawns and bought a Shure SM58 for doing my vocals. It's $100 from Musiciansfriend.com and a good mic. If you can afford it, you should check it out!
Oh, I see, I've had to do that before XD Well cool, keep it up! I think I'll watch you to see how you progress :3

Lol thats cool

Kk ^.^