Ok, I know this is your first picture on here, but, here is a few..pointers i guess you could say, i dont know what else to call them

-first off, if she's supposed to be a hero, fighting in leather is not a good idea
-her wings are clearly made of energy, since there aren't any real feathers
-her neck doesn't look big enough to hold up her head
-Her shoulders look dislocated
-her boobs would be very inconvenient in a fight
-her thighs are actually bigger around than her waist. I'm pretty sure that's not how that works
-and if her thighs were that big, there wouldn't be a triangle of space by her crotch

The coloring and shading are really well done, but, bodies don't work that way...

Stylistic choices. Deal with it.

Dashie is the best Pegasus~