Cute girl! I like her face very much! And her hips, heh. < ^.^ >
Only suggestion I can make is that she needs bigger boobs... :P

xD you would say that :3 Aonice isn't about the boobs though, your thinking of Yumi ^^

Well, I do think boobs can improve almost anything, if you're clever with the application. :P

oh yeah,her hair looks way better in this one ^w^ and she is very smexy here,then again,she always is

He he, she doesn't even have to try :p Thanks for noticin' me xD

the hair is alot better than the original, before it was just abit too 2 dimensional where as Aonice has all the detail so it really made the fact that it had almost none really stand out, also for the colouring youll probably have to do layers if your doing it on a program, then smudge the line differences together to show the shadow and such better, dont take my word for it though I havent actually done it before ^^;

The hair is a lot better in this one than the original. And, as for Stelard's comment about her boobs, they are perfect the way they are.