After talking with a good friend of mine for a while...we decided that this song really didn't need much more. It didn't need to be long to say what it's supposed to say.
Hope you guys like it. Another song song to add to my fingerpicked originals collection~ xD.
Lyrics:
You say that I take life for granted
That I should just slow down
You say that life's a precious temporary trip
And maybe I should stick around
So every day I'm walking backwards
Don't wanna look at what's ahead
And I just keep on getting knocked back down
So I look up to you again
If you let me lean on you
You can keep me burning bright
I hope that you don't mind
If I stay here tonight
You say that love's a lot like gravity
And I keep on coming back
You know that I could never say you're wrong
I guess that love's a bit like that
The weary weather keeps us counting
Every second we're apart
The rain keeps falling down but it all just fades away
With the beating of your heart
If you let me lean on you
You can keep me burning bright
I hope that you don't mind
If I stay here tonight
If you let me lean on you
You can keep me burning bright
I hope that you don't mind
If I stay here tonight
Hope you guys like it. Another song song to add to my fingerpicked originals collection~ xD.
Lyrics:
You say that I take life for granted
That I should just slow down
You say that life's a precious temporary trip
And maybe I should stick around
So every day I'm walking backwards
Don't wanna look at what's ahead
And I just keep on getting knocked back down
So I look up to you again
If you let me lean on you
You can keep me burning bright
I hope that you don't mind
If I stay here tonight
You say that love's a lot like gravity
And I keep on coming back
You know that I could never say you're wrong
I guess that love's a bit like that
The weary weather keeps us counting
Every second we're apart
The rain keeps falling down but it all just fades away
With the beating of your heart
If you let me lean on you
You can keep me burning bright
I hope that you don't mind
If I stay here tonight
If you let me lean on you
You can keep me burning bright
I hope that you don't mind
If I stay here tonight
Category Music / Pop
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 3.17 MB
This is really professional sounding - the melody, the structure of the song, the lyrics - everything sounds like a perfect song to be played in radio on a daily basis.
The song has hit potential if you ask me.
Fun fact: When my mate
datbaldur played this song over and over again and decided to do a cover of it, I thought it's a new song from some new famous star in the music industry. When he told me that it's written by a furry from FA, I didn't believe him at first. That's how well written your piece of music here is
The song has hit potential if you ask me.
Fun fact: When my mate
datbaldur played this song over and over again and decided to do a cover of it, I thought it's a new song from some new famous star in the music industry. When he told me that it's written by a furry from FA, I didn't believe him at first. That's how well written your piece of music here is
...okay, now I'm blushing ^^;;...
I fumbled a lot with this song when I was writing it. In fact, I wasn't even 100% convinced that it was finished until I showed it to a close friend of mine.
I'd love to try to get into the music industry, and it's awesome when I get a comment like this. It's a tough industry to get into, and there's so much talent in the industry already that it's just daunting. Worrying about whether I could get anywhere when there are better singers, guitarists, writers...comments like this give me hope that some day I'll be able to make it happen ^^.
Thanks a bunch <3. And don't be a stranger ^^. Baldur's a great guy...so I figured his mate would be, too. And you've just made one hell of a first impression *chuckles*.
I fumbled a lot with this song when I was writing it. In fact, I wasn't even 100% convinced that it was finished until I showed it to a close friend of mine.
I'd love to try to get into the music industry, and it's awesome when I get a comment like this. It's a tough industry to get into, and there's so much talent in the industry already that it's just daunting. Worrying about whether I could get anywhere when there are better singers, guitarists, writers...comments like this give me hope that some day I'll be able to make it happen ^^.
Thanks a bunch <3. And don't be a stranger ^^. Baldur's a great guy...so I figured his mate would be, too. And you've just made one hell of a first impression *chuckles*.
Normally, I'm just a lurker here, but, I felt the need to say something.
I agree with Asgraeac 100%. The chord progression, tone, melody of voice compliment each other superbly, and the confident fingering helps, too. For a long time, I've been hovering over the idea of trying again to make my place in the music world outside my own personal community, and I must say, this has given me the motivation to do so. *Applauds.* You're a gifted artist, don't sell yourself short.
I agree with Asgraeac 100%. The chord progression, tone, melody of voice compliment each other superbly, and the confident fingering helps, too. For a long time, I've been hovering over the idea of trying again to make my place in the music world outside my own personal community, and I must say, this has given me the motivation to do so. *Applauds.* You're a gifted artist, don't sell yourself short.
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