I'm not trying to be mean, or anything, this is what I think, though... I think the hips are too big, and it makes her look like she is fat. That, and because the shape of a woman is in more of an hour glass, the bust and the hips are about the same width, then it slims in for the hips, because hips are used to help carry childern{Hence is why males don't really have them}. That is the only thing that strikes me as really... Wrong with it. When drawing woman, you have to think... Hour glass. That is why women are harder to draw then men. ^^;

Thanks shugo. i kinda overexagerrated the hips...cause i like big hips XD; but i'll keep it in mind in the future.

I just wanna say the first thing that pulled me in about this picture was her huge hips. Totally love them. Too many of the pics people draw are based on stick girls, and even though she's not proportional (in that her hips are very very large compared to the rest of her) she still looks more real to me than most girls.

Shugo's point is a decent enough one, if you're trying to draw a stereotypical run of the mill "Barbie" girl, but I rather like the fact that instead of going off of what would be perfect, you drew an average woman. Perhaps not perfect, but sexy none-the-less. I like that.