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A KVGF (Kosher Vegan Gluten-Free) version of CLICK HERE, for the hypno furries who prefer eye spirals to nose spirals and self-insertion to bodyswap. Which I'd bet is most hypno furries!
I like the composition better on this version, but it loses something when the viewer doesn't have to imagine that they're me.
I like the composition better on this version, but it loses something when the viewer doesn't have to imagine that they're me.
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A couple thoughts:
* I think I prefer this version to the other one. Even when you're dealing with a first person perspective, people usually lose awareness of their own limbs, so seeing them is kind of awkward and distracting.
* The guassian blur you used doesn't really create an effective depth-of-field. Maybe it's because the figure's still in front of a sharp, abstract background? It's either that or just that your flat-shaded lineless style doesn't play well with blur effects.
* I know I know I know this is hypnosis art, but that background is ugly. The colors are really bright compared to what you're supposed to be focusing on in the foreground (which, given the depth of field effect, is about 1/16th of a square inch large). I honestly have trouble focusing on the main figure without the background competing for my attention.
I hope this helps you in future drawings. Sorry for being negative.
* I think I prefer this version to the other one. Even when you're dealing with a first person perspective, people usually lose awareness of their own limbs, so seeing them is kind of awkward and distracting.
* The guassian blur you used doesn't really create an effective depth-of-field. Maybe it's because the figure's still in front of a sharp, abstract background? It's either that or just that your flat-shaded lineless style doesn't play well with blur effects.
* I know I know I know this is hypnosis art, but that background is ugly. The colors are really bright compared to what you're supposed to be focusing on in the foreground (which, given the depth of field effect, is about 1/16th of a square inch large). I honestly have trouble focusing on the main figure without the background competing for my attention.
I hope this helps you in future drawings. Sorry for being negative.
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