Chibis for the win!

Great job with the clothing first off. The look like they are worn instead of just hanging in the air around the character. All the folds, hanging sleeve, and curves. Very nice curves in fact. She has a nice pair of legs and cleavage to match. I think her face could use a little more shading like the guy's. His face has a good amount of shaded detail. Nice angular shape too, nice stiff collar on his jacket or shirt. The chibi portion is really cute. I like the speech ballons over the opposite character's head. Dialogue reminds me of a japanese dub : )

learn from this guy!! thats my message to the world!!! this is a comment!!