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Alright, we pause the action for a little plot set up. Yes, this madness has a plot of sorts.
Here's the facts.
1. the demons really want something in Karmakat's dimension they always have but travel to that dimension is difficult so they can only send a few at a time.
2. Travel from the demon world to the Zodiac world has become easy as has travel from Karmakat's world to the Zodiac world. However, the demons have to conquer the Zodiac world formally before they can properly invade Karmakat's and the situation may be temporary so the demons have to hurry.
3. A formal demonic invasion involves sending scouts as a formal announcement of intent. This forces that world to gather champions who will then be pitted against any demonic champions once all the scouts are destroyed.
4. If the homeworld's champions cannot defeat the demon's challenge (which varies but almost always involves bloodshed) the demons will formally own that world and can do with it as they please.
Next time, we will get a glimpse of the opposition and the challenge our heroes must face if they are to save their respective worlds.
karmakatCOVER PAGE
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Alright, we pause the action for a little plot set up. Yes, this madness has a plot of sorts.
Here's the facts.
1. the demons really want something in Karmakat's dimension they always have but travel to that dimension is difficult so they can only send a few at a time.
2. Travel from the demon world to the Zodiac world has become easy as has travel from Karmakat's world to the Zodiac world. However, the demons have to conquer the Zodiac world formally before they can properly invade Karmakat's and the situation may be temporary so the demons have to hurry.
3. A formal demonic invasion involves sending scouts as a formal announcement of intent. This forces that world to gather champions who will then be pitted against any demonic champions once all the scouts are destroyed.
4. If the homeworld's champions cannot defeat the demon's challenge (which varies but almost always involves bloodshed) the demons will formally own that world and can do with it as they please.
Next time, we will get a glimpse of the opposition and the challenge our heroes must face if they are to save their respective worlds.
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1200 x 1757px
File Size 406.4 kB
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well i did a whole 20 chapters for my personal story, this one with eggplantman is more like a parralel dimension, and well i writted two others short stories for the book ROAR vol 5 and for Galen.
i got imagination that basically doesn't let me rest if i don't put it on drawing or story lol
i got imagination that basically doesn't let me rest if i don't put it on drawing or story lol
yeah but WH got no real plot idea everytime. all he want is blood, fight until entrails pop out and well the loser's "beep"
thats why he liked my idea for once because otherwise only tiptoe was offering nice comic ideas
so you should give it a shot at least maybe
thats why he liked my idea for once because otherwise only tiptoe was offering nice comic ideas
so you should give it a shot at least maybe
better try and know a real answer instead of living in regrets of a "what if" no?
thats what i think every time i try to send one of my stories or drawings lol
and what i keep thinking those last month that i am working my tail off for Ac and Ef artshows lol
thats what i think every time i try to send one of my stories or drawings lol
and what i keep thinking those last month that i am working my tail off for Ac and Ef artshows lol
Nope, I agree the idea is almost parallel to the concept of Mortal Kombat. I saw it and recognized it too but it works great since magic is so heavily involved anyway. How it's going to work out will be a little different though. It will not be a simple tournament nor an all out brawl with the last person standing taking it all.
Hmm. Based on that scanty information then, it sounds a bit like two teams of "champions" competing against each other in a sort of gladiator-style match, where the goal is to annihilate the other team. It could be done another way, but that seems to be the best match I can come up with.
Grammar check! in panel 2: "...the demons are still after Karmakat and I's homeworld..."
No. It's "...the demons are still after Karmakat's and my homeworld...".
The former makes it sound like Karmakat and the homeworld are separate targets. And you never use the word "I" in that fashion.
The apostrophe s goes to Karmakat and the 'I' is changed to 'my'. Best way to doublecheck this is to use each one separately. "The demons are after Karmakat's homeworld." "The demons are after my homeworld."
No. It's "...the demons are still after Karmakat's and my homeworld...".
The former makes it sound like Karmakat and the homeworld are separate targets. And you never use the word "I" in that fashion.
The apostrophe s goes to Karmakat and the 'I' is changed to 'my'. Best way to doublecheck this is to use each one separately. "The demons are after Karmakat's homeworld." "The demons are after my homeworld."
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