Warning, this story contains vore, so if you don't like it, you better not read it.
Or maybe you should, I really don't care.
Anyway, I actually wrote this story because I'm torn on the subject myself. I enjoy macro stuff, but some parts of the fetish are touchy, mostly the violent aspects, things like vore fall into those touchy areas, so I wrote this short to explore it a little.
Or maybe you should, I really don't care.
Anyway, I actually wrote this story because I'm torn on the subject myself. I enjoy macro stuff, but some parts of the fetish are touchy, mostly the violent aspects, things like vore fall into those touchy areas, so I wrote this short to explore it a little.
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 120 x 110px
File Size 11.7 kB
i'm into vore, personally.
but might i suggest reformation or non-digestion? or at least a warning that fatalities are involved? i took a quick glance at your recent uploads, and i don't really see much vore there. do i need to look deeper to find more from you, or is this just a first time thing? are YOU into vore, or are you just 'dipping your toe into the pool', so to speak? do tell, i'm curious about your stance on the matter.
but might i suggest reformation or non-digestion? or at least a warning that fatalities are involved? i took a quick glance at your recent uploads, and i don't really see much vore there. do i need to look deeper to find more from you, or is this just a first time thing? are YOU into vore, or are you just 'dipping your toe into the pool', so to speak? do tell, i'm curious about your stance on the matter.
Yeah, you wont find much vore stuff aside from the occasional joke or implied predator prey situation.
Personally, as stated in the description I'm torn on the idea, could go either way.
I definitely like mouth play and nonviolent macro micro stuff. Teasing and such is fun. But once it crosses into the realm of violent where a macro kills or hurts micros thats harder for me. I tend to empathize with the characters and dont like the idea of someone asserting power over others 'just because'.
I know its just fantasy, but its still a sore subject i really just dont like people being taken advantage of.
So the answer is a resounding... it depends. As long as everythings concentual then i dont mind either way. But the more violent and controlling vore and other acts i tend to not like them. So most of what youll see in my gallery is gentle fun stuff.
Personally, as stated in the description I'm torn on the idea, could go either way.
I definitely like mouth play and nonviolent macro micro stuff. Teasing and such is fun. But once it crosses into the realm of violent where a macro kills or hurts micros thats harder for me. I tend to empathize with the characters and dont like the idea of someone asserting power over others 'just because'.
I know its just fantasy, but its still a sore subject i really just dont like people being taken advantage of.
So the answer is a resounding... it depends. As long as everythings concentual then i dont mind either way. But the more violent and controlling vore and other acts i tend to not like them. So most of what youll see in my gallery is gentle fun stuff.
i like you. i also emphysize with the chars, and the way most macros treat micros makes me sick. i'm glad to meet someone who shares my mindset when it comes to micros and vore. this is not the answer i was expecting; i'm a rather cynical person, and i'm very glad i got an answer i wasn't expecting. i think i'll look into you! if you're in the mood for vore stories that don't feature death, please do see my work. until then, good luck with yours, and again, i'm very glad to meet someone who feels the way i do. nice to meet you, my newfound aquantince.
I took a quick look at the rules you posted. I agree with your ideas and generally follow them myself. I will take a look through the rest when i can. Hopefully you can find some enjoyable stuff in my gallery as well. If you like cute characters and playful puns theres plenty of those.
Very nice writing, you have greater grammer(Only did one read through and to be honest, I tend to blow at grammer no matter how much I've written, so might be wrong. XD) and sense for detail in the characters, giving a very clear image of Amanda even for those who have not seen the pictures.
I'm guessing you did not flesh out the micros because of, as the above comments point out, you are not into the whole cruelty mindset and thus the story is more suited with simple "He's and she's" who get in trouble, though you still gave interaction which keeps them from being completely uninteresting.
One complaint I want to slap in is just who the heck is that mysterious "I" at the end? :P But I suppose it's a matter of personal opinion, I'm not one for 'open answers' when there can easily be given a proper designation.
And in case you'd go poking at my gallery, just let me warn you ahead that it's some pretty nasty stuff in there. I'm usually get my inspiration from gore filled chaos. :P
I'm guessing you did not flesh out the micros because of, as the above comments point out, you are not into the whole cruelty mindset and thus the story is more suited with simple "He's and she's" who get in trouble, though you still gave interaction which keeps them from being completely uninteresting.
One complaint I want to slap in is just who the heck is that mysterious "I" at the end? :P But I suppose it's a matter of personal opinion, I'm not one for 'open answers' when there can easily be given a proper designation.
And in case you'd go poking at my gallery, just let me warn you ahead that it's some pretty nasty stuff in there. I'm usually get my inspiration from gore filled chaos. :P
Yeah, you pretty much nailed it all. XD
As far as the grammar and spelling goes, there are minor mistakes, but... I wrote the whole thing using a text program on my cellphone so, considering that its pretty damn good.
I was considering giving more detail to the micros but then the problem would occur that, the characters would have to much depth and anything that happened after would seem too cruel. Its easier to handle with generic characters. It also fits her mind set, fact is she doesn't care what they look like or any of that. She's just using them for fun and that's that.
As far as the 'i' at the end, if you're referring to the final sentence "like I said. I LIKE it." That's Amanda answering the narrator. Possibly a doctor or psychiatrist.
That character may actually come back, this is case study 1, so the idea is if I come up with any other ideas for quick stories that fit this theme the doctor can present it as an argument or discuss the mental/emotional side of the story and link them together in a way that creates a sense of flow like an ongoing series.
That is assuming, of course, that inspiration strikes and I have the time to write again.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
As far as the grammar and spelling goes, there are minor mistakes, but... I wrote the whole thing using a text program on my cellphone so, considering that its pretty damn good.
I was considering giving more detail to the micros but then the problem would occur that, the characters would have to much depth and anything that happened after would seem too cruel. Its easier to handle with generic characters. It also fits her mind set, fact is she doesn't care what they look like or any of that. She's just using them for fun and that's that.
As far as the 'i' at the end, if you're referring to the final sentence "like I said. I LIKE it." That's Amanda answering the narrator. Possibly a doctor or psychiatrist.
That character may actually come back, this is case study 1, so the idea is if I come up with any other ideas for quick stories that fit this theme the doctor can present it as an argument or discuss the mental/emotional side of the story and link them together in a way that creates a sense of flow like an ongoing series.
That is assuming, of course, that inspiration strikes and I have the time to write again.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I actually read this while being all to tired and missed out on the 'This is a log made by someone on Amanda' part, not noticing it as I commented the day after giving some thought to the whole creation.
To each their own, it was a good read and I hope to see more from you. Always appreciate good writing, no matter the nature.
And thank you for your work, commenting is hardly worth noting, as rarely as I do it. Be well and happy easter.
To each their own, it was a good read and I hope to see more from you. Always appreciate good writing, no matter the nature.
And thank you for your work, commenting is hardly worth noting, as rarely as I do it. Be well and happy easter.
Actually, putting this into perspective, there was no real violence in this story. Sure we get a *gulp* and it's presumed they're dead, but there was no real on-screen violence, and the vore side was extremely light when compared to other stories. Hell, this story seemed to focus more on the enjoyment Amanda gets from her evil ways than the actual vore.
So if you were to write any more stories in the future, they can be written like this since they don't technically qualify. That's how I see it, anyway.
So if you were to write any more stories in the future, they can be written like this since they don't technically qualify. That's how I see it, anyway.
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