Hey, this is actually really gorgeous! I love the colours and the sparkles.. Your shading is really smooth too C:
But for the wings I think you should check out some tutorials C: <3 They kinda look like paintbrushes right now, with the feathers kinda clumped?
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=bird%20wings%20tutorial&order=9&offset=24#/d3a1uc0
http://skudde.deviantart.com/art/Skudde-s-Wing-Tutorial-189345597?q=boost%3Apopular%20bird%20wings%20tutorial&qo=43

I thought these two are really good and could help :] anyways, you have a beautiful style, so keep up the great work! :D Plus, who doesn't love MLP! <3

:O~!!! THESE TUTORIALS WILL HELP ME SOOO MUCH... I still need to get back into drawing wings again OTL even though this is old augh. but mlp wings are so hard for me.. maybe when I get myself working on them again I'll do better, thank you so much for the help >w<

And thank you for telling me that, it really means a lot~

DUDE I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND like I made a clay pony for my boyfriend and like THE WINGS FUCKED ME UP SO BAD. Like, yeah, I toooootally understand the struggle with them, they're a huge bitch (Realistic or not!) I'm so glad you appreciate the help and didn't get mad like some people do X'D <3

But yeah, no! Your art really caught my eye and I was super impressed :] I think people on FA don't appreciate the middle level artists enough, where we're pretty good but not yet amazing, you know? I feel like some people need a little boost and help sometimes, to remind them they're getting there :D so keep working at it! I bet you'll go far :D Especially because your style is so ~adorable~ <3