Well, considering my several previous attempts at story writing have... not received any feed back, or recognition etc. I have decided to write this, combining two of my favorite things. Warhammer 40K and furries.

If i get no comments etc on this, then screw it, I won't wright any more. I think my angle has been wrong before, but this is really a make or break point.

If you are going to take the time to read it though, please, add some constructive criticism, not just "That's awesome/shite". I know it's far from perfect, so tell me where I'm going wrong, and I might start doing a small story or two following some regiments I've got planned in my head. Enjoy, I hope.