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i've been wanting to learn how to paint... and i suck soo hard ....
so imma try to do some kinda of painting every day ... this day two actually
i wish i had mentor or someone to teach me i have no grasp at this at all.
so imma try to do some kinda of painting every day ... this day two actually
i wish i had mentor or someone to teach me i have no grasp at this at all.
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Hi, my name is Brittany, or Bria, and I'm 23. *shakes your hand*
I like cats and wolves very much, and I hate most country music.
I also thought your work was rather charming.
But since I'm not artistic enough, I won't defile your gallery with petty Watches and Favorites.
Have a good day.
I like cats and wolves very much, and I hate most country music.
I also thought your work was rather charming.
But since I'm not artistic enough, I won't defile your gallery with petty Watches and Favorites.
Have a good day.
Try purplekecleons color theory tutorial.
http://purplekecleon.deviantart.com.....rial-184642625
http://purplekecleon.deviantart.com.....rial-184642625
You could talk to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/ryanwardlow/ or http://www.furaffinity.net/user/ratwell/
Both absurdly great at digital paintin'!
Both absurdly great at digital paintin'!
Dude!?! Are you kidding me? This is fantastic!!
Although I did notice you used some brushes for the leaved vines, no big deal though. The flower emitting the spores of light is a pretty cool concept. Was there any inspiration from Hayao Miyazaki's film, Nausicaa; of The Valley of The Wind? In any case the flowers shinning spores almost give the viewer the illusion that there's an opening in the background with bright light, like over exposure captured through a film camera's lens from the suns bright rays. I don't know if that was your intention but, damn, that's really cool! Also because you tried to make the focal point the flower itself with the support of the flora, in essence you gave the picture a mysterious and awes-trucking trait while being mixed with excitement, curiosity, pleasure and relaxation. That's a pretty tough feat to accomplish with these emotions combined. Now with Dreamingwyld's insightful critique (dispite the fact that he's an art student), I'd have to say that he's right about there being too much bright light spouting from the flower into the sky and with that... the focal point is suffering attention. While I love the concept of the flowers spores emitting a glow I suggest you thin out the density of the plum of spores (if that's what they are, no offense) and allow them to glow with as much or as little of the same luminescence as the flower itself. I suggest you should breath some life into this picture with choice fauna being drawn into the flower and it's spores radiating glow.
Well I guess that the best I can offer in terms of a good critique. This picture is not even close to being bad, however, there is room for improvement. Still the outcome has been acknowledged and very much so appreciated by yours truly as well as other who may or may not read this critique and find it suitably fair. :3
In short, fabulous work Amun!
Although I did notice you used some brushes for the leaved vines, no big deal though. The flower emitting the spores of light is a pretty cool concept. Was there any inspiration from Hayao Miyazaki's film, Nausicaa; of The Valley of The Wind? In any case the flowers shinning spores almost give the viewer the illusion that there's an opening in the background with bright light, like over exposure captured through a film camera's lens from the suns bright rays. I don't know if that was your intention but, damn, that's really cool! Also because you tried to make the focal point the flower itself with the support of the flora, in essence you gave the picture a mysterious and awes-trucking trait while being mixed with excitement, curiosity, pleasure and relaxation. That's a pretty tough feat to accomplish with these emotions combined. Now with Dreamingwyld's insightful critique (dispite the fact that he's an art student), I'd have to say that he's right about there being too much bright light spouting from the flower into the sky and with that... the focal point is suffering attention. While I love the concept of the flowers spores emitting a glow I suggest you thin out the density of the plum of spores (if that's what they are, no offense) and allow them to glow with as much or as little of the same luminescence as the flower itself. I suggest you should breath some life into this picture with choice fauna being drawn into the flower and it's spores radiating glow.
Well I guess that the best I can offer in terms of a good critique. This picture is not even close to being bad, however, there is room for improvement. Still the outcome has been acknowledged and very much so appreciated by yours truly as well as other who may or may not read this critique and find it suitably fair. :3
In short, fabulous work Amun!
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