This is my first every art of Dira Halfwing. I truly hope there is more to come. Please give me your opinion on her face. I need some help with the birdies.
The bird this is supposed to be is: http://www.flickr.com/photos/645652.....N00/2478487006
Dira and Art are MIEN! MIEN! MIEN! MIEN! MIEN!
The bird this is supposed to be is: http://www.flickr.com/photos/645652.....N00/2478487006
Dira and Art are MIEN! MIEN! MIEN! MIEN! MIEN!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Eagle
Size 873 x 650px
File Size 305.7 kB
Here's some critique for ya:
- The tip of the beak should be shorter
- The forehead should have a ridge above the eyes, characteristic to eagles: http://images.nationalgeographic.co....._1_600x450.jpg
- Also you should show the separation of the beak from the facial feathers, as you can see in the link I gave you above.
Hope that's helpful! ^v^
- The tip of the beak should be shorter
- The forehead should have a ridge above the eyes, characteristic to eagles: http://images.nationalgeographic.co....._1_600x450.jpg
- Also you should show the separation of the beak from the facial feathers, as you can see in the link I gave you above.
Hope that's helpful! ^v^
I see what you are saying, but she is a different type of eagle.
Here is the ref pic: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:P.....oryphus)_2.jpg
Though, I should try to work on the ridge above the eye.
Thank you. I'll work on that with the next ones ^^
Here is the ref pic: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:P.....oryphus)_2.jpg
Though, I should try to work on the ridge above the eye.
Thank you. I'll work on that with the next ones ^^
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