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crackel I need to know if this is easily understandable to others besides Crackel and myself. He basically told me what he wanted and I put down what my mind formed as he told me. He says its great. But I really need to know if others understand it.
This is a 'sona profile for
crackel I need to know if this is easily understandable to others besides Crackel and myself. He basically told me what he wanted and I put down what my mind formed as he told me. He says its great. But I really need to know if others understand it.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Owl
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"Star sign: Libra"
Sign of the Zodiac: Libra The star sign is more commonly known as the sign of the Zodiac, whereas the labeled 'Chinese Zodiac Sign' below is referred to as just what 'Animal year' you were born in. It's a common mistake, nothing serious.
"Chinese Zodiac sign: Dog 1994"
Born in: 1994, the Year of the Dog.
"In return, they are faithful friends, shy at first, then warm and affectionate."
In return, they are faithful friends: shy at first, then warm and affectionate.
"and long black hair with a Sapphire Blue streak that is in the left parting of her hair."
and long black hair with a sapphire blue streak in the left parting. It flows better when you don't repeat word like 'hair' too often.
"being that the only part of her in "Anthro" form are feathered her wings."
being that the only part of her in "Anthro" form are her feathered wings.
"Her wings has two different patterns"
Her wings have two different patterns
"Where as the outside of her wings are pure white and EACH feather on the inside of the wings are striped from the "top" down from White to grey to black to sapphire blue. Her wing span is about 10 foot(304.8 cm) in her "Anthro" Form. In her "feral" form her wings are the same, but her main body feathers are white with the ocassional grey speckle. Her wing span in "feral" is on the larger side for a Snowy Owl 4'11.05 (150cm.)"
The outside of her wings are pure white, with no real pattern; whereas each individual feather on the underside of her wings are striped from the top down with white, grey, black, and sapphire blue. Her wingspan is about ten feet, or three hundred and four centimeters in her "Anthro" form. In her "Feral" form, the wingspan, while still on the large side for a snowy owl, is a scant four foot eleven, or about a hundred and fifty centimeters.
Also, I don't know if it's an obscure reference to something, but it's not generally spelled 'Magick'. Usually you see it spelled 'Magic'.
Sign of the Zodiac: Libra The star sign is more commonly known as the sign of the Zodiac, whereas the labeled 'Chinese Zodiac Sign' below is referred to as just what 'Animal year' you were born in. It's a common mistake, nothing serious.
"Chinese Zodiac sign: Dog 1994"
Born in: 1994, the Year of the Dog.
"In return, they are faithful friends, shy at first, then warm and affectionate."
In return, they are faithful friends: shy at first, then warm and affectionate.
"and long black hair with a Sapphire Blue streak that is in the left parting of her hair."
and long black hair with a sapphire blue streak in the left parting. It flows better when you don't repeat word like 'hair' too often.
"being that the only part of her in "Anthro" form are feathered her wings."
being that the only part of her in "Anthro" form are her feathered wings.
"Her wings has two different patterns"
Her wings have two different patterns
"Where as the outside of her wings are pure white and EACH feather on the inside of the wings are striped from the "top" down from White to grey to black to sapphire blue. Her wing span is about 10 foot(304.8 cm) in her "Anthro" Form. In her "feral" form her wings are the same, but her main body feathers are white with the ocassional grey speckle. Her wing span in "feral" is on the larger side for a Snowy Owl 4'11.05 (150cm.)"
The outside of her wings are pure white, with no real pattern; whereas each individual feather on the underside of her wings are striped from the top down with white, grey, black, and sapphire blue. Her wingspan is about ten feet, or three hundred and four centimeters in her "Anthro" form. In her "Feral" form, the wingspan, while still on the large side for a snowy owl, is a scant four foot eleven, or about a hundred and fifty centimeters.
Also, I don't know if it's an obscure reference to something, but it's not generally spelled 'Magick'. Usually you see it spelled 'Magic'.
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