Script (S - Squirrelflight):
Panel 1.
S: "You tried to kill your leader. You put three innocent warriors in danger. You would've put the whole Clan in jeopardy, if you weren't... you know..."
Another page! Tried using thinner linearts (thanks to the new pen I've bought that actually works!). What do you think?
Just in case, the cat in the upper corner is Firestar, the three cats are Jayfeather, Hollyleaf and Lionblaze, in the lower corner, there are supposed to be Firestar and Leopardstar, with Ashfur in the roots.
P.S. I know Jayfeather is not a warrior. I had 'kits' in the original script but the three weren't kits anymore. I tried to make it sound better... and messed it up even more ^^*
Panel 1.
S: "You tried to kill your leader. You put three innocent warriors in danger. You would've put the whole Clan in jeopardy, if you weren't... you know..."
Another page! Tried using thinner linearts (thanks to the new pen I've bought that actually works!). What do you think?
Just in case, the cat in the upper corner is Firestar, the three cats are Jayfeather, Hollyleaf and Lionblaze, in the lower corner, there are supposed to be Firestar and Leopardstar, with Ashfur in the roots.
P.S. I know Jayfeather is not a warrior. I had 'kits' in the original script but the three weren't kits anymore. I tried to make it sound better... and messed it up even more ^^*
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Housecat
Size 800 x 1107px
File Size 224.9 kB
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