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Category Artwork (Digital) / Muscle
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a bit of an explanation on the lack of comments on the 3 proceeding this one (from that last one I commented on) they were apparently "REALLY old" pictures so I figured it wouldn't be fair to critique too much on stuff that you had done years and years ago, I'm pretty sure I did it on the "hell" picture but I don't think I noticed that year by then....mistakes happens ^^;;
So anyway on to this one, I tried looking in
slyver's gallary for a reference of her in colour but could only find this one http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5486432/ and well....not too helpful is it? From what I've been able to gather from it though you seem to have kept very well to how she is depicted, mostly white with that blue on the back, perhaps a speck of blue on the tricep had been good though since she seems to have the blue go over there as well? I'm thinking most on this image right now http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5309028/ (this is sorts of the issue I find whne people don't have reference sheets of their characters as each artist does them all a little bit different so it's hard to get the design to be uniform unless you have a standard model to follow....(says the one who has worked on hsi reference sheet for years and never finished it xD;; )).
I like the cocky expression she has though it's very well executed, I wonder though how befitting the character it is? From what little I've seen of her she doesn't seem the kind of person to be like that. But I may of coarse be wrong you probably know the guy/gal/creator better then I do ( sure don't know him :P)
I don't really have an awful lot of negative things to say about this one, perhaps I feel it's a bit simplistic but yeah it's a gift can't expect too much I suppose. The one thing I noticed that might be worth a bit of some note is the split lip going to her nose. Dogs don't have that as far as I know it's only cats that do (and some cervids but she's hardly a deer now is she? ^_^) the ear also seems to lack some definition but it's just a minor peeve I have with it, I like consistency with the levels of detail.
I'll close by saying that I really like the amount of sinew definition you have in there, good work with the dark shadows to show the muscle attachment on the pectoralis mayor and deltriod. I'm enthralled by the touch you did on the bra top and how the patterns look on that cloth, especially how it warps around the general nipple area. That is some neat stuff right there folks (like anyone but you were reading it lols xD) , I'm not quite sure how I feel about the little pink you added in by the sides of it though, it makes sense and it's a good touch when it comes to detail but as far as I know....nipples are normally quite well defined from the other skin around it, it's not so much a gradual shift from one to another.
good work dude!
So anyway on to this one, I tried looking in
slyver's gallary for a reference of her in colour but could only find this one http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5486432/ and well....not too helpful is it? From what I've been able to gather from it though you seem to have kept very well to how she is depicted, mostly white with that blue on the back, perhaps a speck of blue on the tricep had been good though since she seems to have the blue go over there as well? I'm thinking most on this image right now http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5309028/ (this is sorts of the issue I find whne people don't have reference sheets of their characters as each artist does them all a little bit different so it's hard to get the design to be uniform unless you have a standard model to follow....(says the one who has worked on hsi reference sheet for years and never finished it xD;; )).I like the cocky expression she has though it's very well executed, I wonder though how befitting the character it is? From what little I've seen of her she doesn't seem the kind of person to be like that. But I may of coarse be wrong you probably know the guy/gal/creator better then I do ( sure don't know him :P)
I don't really have an awful lot of negative things to say about this one, perhaps I feel it's a bit simplistic but yeah it's a gift can't expect too much I suppose. The one thing I noticed that might be worth a bit of some note is the split lip going to her nose. Dogs don't have that as far as I know it's only cats that do (and some cervids but she's hardly a deer now is she? ^_^) the ear also seems to lack some definition but it's just a minor peeve I have with it, I like consistency with the levels of detail.
I'll close by saying that I really like the amount of sinew definition you have in there, good work with the dark shadows to show the muscle attachment on the pectoralis mayor and deltriod. I'm enthralled by the touch you did on the bra top and how the patterns look on that cloth, especially how it warps around the general nipple area. That is some neat stuff right there folks (like anyone but you were reading it lols xD) , I'm not quite sure how I feel about the little pink you added in by the sides of it though, it makes sense and it's a good touch when it comes to detail but as far as I know....nipples are normally quite well defined from the other skin around it, it's not so much a gradual shift from one to another.
good work dude!
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