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Again, nice work on the facial expressions.
I can't shake the feeling of the templated approach in the first three pannels, as the poses are basically the same.
I also spot reoccurring poses from other pages, which gives the whole collection the impression of paper-cut action figure comix, where there are perhaps 5 or 6 models/poses in total, and they repeat itself.
I can see you're learning; don't be afraid to experiment, it may come out a bit worse then something you're used to, but it's something new every time :)
Cheers.
I can't shake the feeling of the templated approach in the first three pannels, as the poses are basically the same.
I also spot reoccurring poses from other pages, which gives the whole collection the impression of paper-cut action figure comix, where there are perhaps 5 or 6 models/poses in total, and they repeat itself.
I can see you're learning; don't be afraid to experiment, it may come out a bit worse then something you're used to, but it's something new every time :)
Cheers.
The boring poses are this comic's greatest weakness. It's not that I can't do dynamism and action and all that jazz. I had just intended for the comic to be bi-weekly. So I threw out a lot of unnecessary stuff that would only slow me down like action, dynamic poses, technology and complex backgrounds. In retrospect I might have thrown out a bit too much though.
But the plan worked fairly well and I got all 26 pages penciled in under a week. As I still had 12 weeks left I decided to be bold and try out digitally inking and coloring it all. So far that has been a total disaster.
I'll probably just drop the color in the near future and ink manually, redrawing some older frames for increased dynamism in the process.
But the plan worked fairly well and I got all 26 pages penciled in under a week. As I still had 12 weeks left I decided to be bold and try out digitally inking and coloring it all. So far that has been a total disaster.
I'll probably just drop the color in the near future and ink manually, redrawing some older frames for increased dynamism in the process.
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