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Goddamnit, there is no reason this should have taken me so long to do, especially since I used "pro strats" to save time even. I'm never going to be able to actually keep up any manner of update schedule at this rate...
Anyway, page 2 line art of my Layridin comic. Chet finds a thing.
Anyway, page 2 line art of my Layridin comic. Chet finds a thing.
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I love the old-school lantern on a pole underwater. :D
I do like your style a lot, but one thing has been making my head ache a little, if you don't mind a tiny bit of crit. For whatever reason, it feels like it's very hard to distinguish where the character ends and the background begins in a lot of your panels (also true with Page 1, though to a lesser extent because of the background choices). That may be intended, of course, or just an inevitable side effect of the style that you're using. Or my brain just might be funky. :V
I do like your style a lot, but one thing has been making my head ache a little, if you don't mind a tiny bit of crit. For whatever reason, it feels like it's very hard to distinguish where the character ends and the background begins in a lot of your panels (also true with Page 1, though to a lesser extent because of the background choices). That may be intended, of course, or just an inevitable side effect of the style that you're using. Or my brain just might be funky. :V
it's probably a side effect of the dramatic lighting I'm using for the spot blacks, which is something I failed hard core at in school anyway. Once Oniontrain actually colors the pages it'll be a lot easier to distinguish Chet from the background, as well it should hopefully be easier once I get him into a better lit area.
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