This is basically where I'm at with the song right now.
I took out the rhythm because it wasn't necesary for this portion of the song. The ending is rather abrupt because this isn't really the end of the song. I just cut off what comes after and added a note to end on.

After this portion of the song the rhythm will come in and the osng will be steadily less ambient. I'm also thinking I'll have it change scales a little. Like a proper spiral I want the song to get further from the original sound as it goes. hopefully this will be a nice long "liek omg electronic overture" or something.

Oh well, I'm having fun working on this, I can't wait to start doing rythmic subdivisions of a 13/8 time signature! That's not even sarcastic I'm actually excited about it!