Not bad you are heading in the right direction =D

Glad you like it. I like the picture myself but I think I may have screwed up her chest in a way. She's kind of turned a little bit. I didn't really notice it till I started inking the picture in, but by then it was too late and I liked the rest of the picture over all. Would you mind telling me which direction I am headed in?

YOu lines seem clean so it look like you put a decent amount of focus into inking., you body definition is good ( I especially like her hands i hate doing hands ) There are areas that can be improved on but most of that will come with practice and repetition.

I love hr face. Still need improvement but it is very wel done gas good feel in it.

Ahh...I see some of them. The eyes are one (The left's kind of uneven). Female characters are also a little trouble for me, which is probably why I can't seem to stop drawing them. But like you said, everything will fall into place with help and practice. Thanks for the input ^^.

I should have more of these types of comments. Focused on where the improvement needs to be and complementive.

yeah i know people like and need commets like this. I am not and expert or anything so I don't reallly try togive these types of comments often. You have a lot ofpotential though... I can really see it in her face I really do like it. Her eye have a great shape to them they just need to be alighned correctly.

And you know what is funny? I atually started off drawing guys but I moved to females beforeI really got the hang of drawning males. Now I can draw girls decently enoughbuti can't draw a muscular guy like i want lol.