Huh. suppose this sounds kind of cruel, but I think this picture's actually pretty nice. Truth be told, the "reactions" of the characters shown aren't very apparent - I only noticed them because you pointed them out. Nothing that couldn't be fixed, though. And I think the inking makes the picture look kind of..."thick", "heavy", something along those lines. Otherwise, though, this picture has some things going for it. The background is pretty well-rendered, with the hinges on the door and everything. Lots of artists I see skimp on background, if it's there at all :). You pulled off both perspectives pretty well, too - the angles look like they were pretty tricky to do, and both came out okay :). And your hands kick my hand's asses - I can't draw hands to save my life, so props to you there.

Overall, not bad.

-Agika

P. S. Just noticed the keyboards. How long did it take you to do this picture?

It took me about three hours to do the original sketchs, and another two hours for the ink...the original sketches are posted right underneath the ink...

Thanks!

...plus the scanner I used was pretty worse than crap, if that takes aways some discretion...