damn, good drawing, i like your style.

as far as a critique goes, i've none really, looks good to me =/

Let this jungle cat have a try at this!

I can sense you're inking with microns. Try using templates to take on curves like the tables, the sofa etc. It'll keep your line constant and you dont have to worry about direction. Maybe french curves would be better.

As for the sofa, try and push the idea of it being in one point perspective/ showing some receding corners with hatching or details doing in the back. It'll give more volume to the object.
Dont forget the keep those floor lines "ordered" keeping some kind of structure to both throw the area in perspective and appeal to eyes.

Man, thats all i can give ya on da spot.

Actually the tiles were done at the last minute and are really lazy, I probably would of erased them at the last minute as well. But I do see what you mean with the 1 point perspective and the table. Just wish I had a French curve tablet on hand, kinda short on money at the moment.

And Microns are all I've got really.

Its all okay dude, art materials are so expensive. Yet, im not too sure but ya might be able to emulate the brush line weight effect by going over ya microns likes, kinda like "drawing your outlines" quite hard with a felt tip pen hahaha but micon pen might have more chance.

again, rock on dude

:3 pleasure doing a trade with ya