It's obvious when you trace when you forget to trace entire lines.

LOL its not a trace I have the sketch picture right here.

The arm looks severely traced, not that it's bad. Just obvious, and if you didn't trace then you are really good at looking like you do.

When arms bend they create deeper creases than you have drawn, and an image missing such detail often looks halfassed and copied off of something you didn't see clearly. :D

Again, it's not a trace. I was unfamiliar with the pose itself so god forbid I'm not pro.

God forbid I'm not trying to offer constructive yet blunt advice because deep down in my heart I think you can actually become some kind of decent artist!!

Of course not, all I mean is to offend you and try to convince you indirectly to quit art and kill yourself.

Because saying I trace is actually an insult.

Unless you can prove she traced this picture, you're just being unpleasant for no reason.

Just so you know, I tend to ignore random commenters who obviously just show up to rub ice on their bff's butt burn.

vin is just someone who likes starting shit, from personal experience

Reported, probably won't accomplish anything though.

probably not, but just don't let her bother you guys too much :3 there's better ways of giving critique instead of claiming WOW YOU OBVIOUSLY TRACED THAT BECAUSE YOU SUCK etc etc so of course she's going to turn around and be like omg i'm helping you to look better? idek man

Newsflash, you're gonna be accused of tracing a lot if you think this is any good.

And just because your friends think it's good doesn't make it good, or right. So just take what I say as what it really is: Destructive criticism. I insulted your picture because it needs work, so get your nose out of your butt.

Even if it isn't traced, it's still terrible. I'm baffled as to how you can go from sketch, to ink, to color without realizing you put the big toe in the wrong place.

I already fixed it.

Admirable, I guess, but it doesn't change the fact you were prefectly okay with it up until people stopped croaking "cuuute" or "so good~ ^ 3^" and actually pointed out flaws in the image.

Uh, probably because she didn't notice it until someone pointed it out? God, and you act like you're such a smart ass.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7361464/

Two right feet, I see.

I gave up on the feet about halfway through lol I'll fix it later.

Two right feet, I see.

copy pasta.

people seem to forget that you can give helpful crits and then you can just be a douche, and anyone who defends that point is your buttbuddy

anyway... this is a tricky pose and it's hard to get it right. i'm not sure if you looked up references but something feels kind of off BUT I CAN'T PUT MY FINGER ON IT blaaaahh... idek i think maybe her head is too high up because her tits seem a little too low? but maybe that's just this pose is a bitch.

uhh.. the hair kind of feels a little too stiff to me, try more fluid lines like if the hair were draping over her shoulder/back! otherwise it feels spiky and weird to look at. hurp.

This. I'll have to tamper a bit more with the drawing itself, maybe redo it all completely later.

also i would recommend blocking anyone who just comments on your pictures JUST to start drama, especially someone like vin. it'll prevent further petty bullshittery in the future.

Alright. Didnt really have to do that before.

yeah, but it's vin and she'll come back to take more stabs at you because she has nothing better to do. i mean, if she were actually being helpful but blunt, it would be different. anyone who acts like a total jackhole like that doesn't deserve your time :V

well I added to my block list. Sankyuu :U

np~

Wow, you did not deserve anything that Vince said. That was totally horrible of them. This is nice, and you're a beginner artist, and so far it looks great to me!

Thank you. I'm always trying to improve by trying new things even if I mess up here and there.

if you'd like, I can redline it to give you a few pointers :3

Sure if you'd like to do that, you could note it to me :3

done >u<

Vince is a butthurt loner, speaking the truth since I know them <8D
Keep up the practice <3 Also, love your icon!

Sankyuu! I'm always trying to improve and I'm open for criticism and all but the only one I seen give it was Ali x3