Hey this is brilliant! I'd cut two measures off the entro maybe... as you listen to the start... the main beat.... 1234 2234 3234 4234 at 7234 the amazing harmonies blend in. You could try starting the harmonies at "5234" or start the first 2 measures with just the highs and blend in the lows for the 3234 and proceed at 7234 as you already are...... ... and work a touch on the end... though you could still leave the end like it is... it just feels unfinished.... Like a good cider... there's no after taste... needs a good one ;)

I've listened to it about 15 times so far... I've started dancing to it in my den... I really really really like it!!!!!! could work on making it longer get a hot vocalist to sing some nice over tones and you'd have a hit on your hands.... LOL Hugs you tight!!!!!!