This was originally a penciled sketch done by
back in 2005. She asked if I could ink and color it in for her and I obliged. The wolf in the picture here we decided to give him the name Bob. Bob is a nice wolf.... no really. If you can get past the demonic eye stare, the snarl, and all that cute stuff, he's really a nice wolfeh. ^_^
Reach your hand out and pet him!
Art ©
Colors by MEEEeeeeeeEEEEEEeeeeEEEEE~!
back in 2005. She asked if I could ink and color it in for her and I obliged. The wolf in the picture here we decided to give him the name Bob. Bob is a nice wolf.... no really. If you can get past the demonic eye stare, the snarl, and all that cute stuff, he's really a nice wolfeh. ^_^Reach your hand out and pet him!
Art ©

Colors by MEEEeeeeeeEEEEEEeeeeEEEEE~!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Wolf
Size 1280 x 787px
File Size 809.6 kB
oh wow it takes me 2 months+ to get back to you with feedback on these pictures? I feel bad now....sorry for that. University has once again been keeping my schedual quite filled, that in unison with a recent move, a marrige and laboration reports has pretty much kept me from doing those long comments. I can tell you more in a note if you'd like.
well in any way I will try to give you comments to the recent posts you have done, starting with this one and going forwards I'll give the critique I can on the pictures I find will bring up any good points. like I said I'm starting on this one, before I start tomorrow though I was wondering if you could provide me with the initial lineart since it was another persons' lineart that you filled in with colour. also if you could do similar things with your other pictures forwards so I wouldn't have to second guess weather certain design decitions comes from the references or from you I would appreciate it, it'd make it easier (not to mention fairer) to give you the critique tomorrow.
well in any way I will try to give you comments to the recent posts you have done, starting with this one and going forwards I'll give the critique I can on the pictures I find will bring up any good points. like I said I'm starting on this one, before I start tomorrow though I was wondering if you could provide me with the initial lineart since it was another persons' lineart that you filled in with colour. also if you could do similar things with your other pictures forwards so I wouldn't have to second guess weather certain design decitions comes from the references or from you I would appreciate it, it'd make it easier (not to mention fairer) to give you the critique tomorrow.
It's all good, Z. I know you you have a lot going on over there so I'm never upset if someone delays, never replies, or whatever to anything I post X3 As far as lineart goes, I won't be sharing that on any web sites. No particular reason really. That's just my decision. The least I can do is stream via Adobe Connect though ^_^
Looking forward to your opinion nonetheless! Thanks again for dropping by!
Looking forward to your opinion nonetheless! Thanks again for dropping by!
lols Z, I have a nickname now do I? ^^
anyways here comes the first of the feedback messages that'll take up most of my day thinking up I imagine, don't worry about it it's all in due time anyways, if I'd done it earlier it wouldn't take me so long when I finally sat down and did it. My own fault ^_^
I'll assume you followed whatever outlines you were provided with and didn't add in or modify anything with the initial lineart, or that you had nothing to do with the initial design itself. From what I can tell it looks like you did a good job on picking out the general colourscheme, it was also a good job for you to make the background out of focus. Something I always tend to forget when I'm making my own stuff ^^;;
The glowing eye is a nice touch but I think I'd have preferred to see a few defining streaks of yellow on the surrounding face rather then just a big yellow splotch over the eye itself, now it lacks a certain definition, like it's not so much glowing as it's got like mist flowing around it or something that can catch the light and disperse it in such a manner. Judging by the rest of the pictures composition I don't think that was intended...
I am a fan of how you made the background, very "ethereal-esque" esepcially how you chose the different colours of red while keeping it RED, if you know what I'm talking about? It's not changing into orange or purple or anything it's all different shades of red while still leaving the different parts of it well defined. Some of the grass that's close to the WP seems a bit sketchy at best though....I also like the water reflections in the lake (of water or blood I wonder? ^^) and the mist like quality around the forests edge, looks very....creepy I suppose? SO kudos on that.
Now on the to character itself, you did a nice colourscheme and I like the fur definition you did with the highlights. You also did an excellent job using the highlights to show the various crevess' on the face of....Bob. You also kept your highlights very consistent to the light source except for one part and that is that top spike of the collar. Judging by that the light would come from the right (WP) but the rest of the body seems to have it come from the left. Also I'm not sure of the rest of the spikes either I don't think they'd have caught the light that good, it looks now like they're receiving light far more then the rest of the body now. I also think you could've done better on the hip area, but again I'm not sure how the lineart looked like so I'm assuming you just followed the outline that the initial sketch told you that "This is where the hip starts".
Also nice little touch with the wolf on the moon, initially I thought it was just lines to show that "hey the moon has some defining features too" but then I saw it was a wolf on it. Derp me for not noticing that at first glance ^^
One down, several more to go!
anyways here comes the first of the feedback messages that'll take up most of my day thinking up I imagine, don't worry about it it's all in due time anyways, if I'd done it earlier it wouldn't take me so long when I finally sat down and did it. My own fault ^_^
I'll assume you followed whatever outlines you were provided with and didn't add in or modify anything with the initial lineart, or that you had nothing to do with the initial design itself. From what I can tell it looks like you did a good job on picking out the general colourscheme, it was also a good job for you to make the background out of focus. Something I always tend to forget when I'm making my own stuff ^^;;
The glowing eye is a nice touch but I think I'd have preferred to see a few defining streaks of yellow on the surrounding face rather then just a big yellow splotch over the eye itself, now it lacks a certain definition, like it's not so much glowing as it's got like mist flowing around it or something that can catch the light and disperse it in such a manner. Judging by the rest of the pictures composition I don't think that was intended...
I am a fan of how you made the background, very "ethereal-esque" esepcially how you chose the different colours of red while keeping it RED, if you know what I'm talking about? It's not changing into orange or purple or anything it's all different shades of red while still leaving the different parts of it well defined. Some of the grass that's close to the WP seems a bit sketchy at best though....I also like the water reflections in the lake (of water or blood I wonder? ^^) and the mist like quality around the forests edge, looks very....creepy I suppose? SO kudos on that.
Now on the to character itself, you did a nice colourscheme and I like the fur definition you did with the highlights. You also did an excellent job using the highlights to show the various crevess' on the face of....Bob. You also kept your highlights very consistent to the light source except for one part and that is that top spike of the collar. Judging by that the light would come from the right (WP) but the rest of the body seems to have it come from the left. Also I'm not sure of the rest of the spikes either I don't think they'd have caught the light that good, it looks now like they're receiving light far more then the rest of the body now. I also think you could've done better on the hip area, but again I'm not sure how the lineart looked like so I'm assuming you just followed the outline that the initial sketch told you that "This is where the hip starts".
Also nice little touch with the wolf on the moon, initially I thought it was just lines to show that "hey the moon has some defining features too" but then I saw it was a wolf on it. Derp me for not noticing that at first glance ^^
One down, several more to go!
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