I'm still a tad apprehensive about creating my own account, even though I'm the last active member of DiRTCReW... Still! This'll be the deciding point. If I get any decent response and/or adulation to this, I'll deeply contemplate starting up my own account and making this the first submission, along with dragging some of my other tripe along for the transition.
Anyway, about the piece! It's a first person (a perspective that I suck horrendously at) meditative work done up at around 4:33 AM whilst being berated by my grandmother on why I'm still up. There's bound to be numerous homo phonic errors, but ah well~
I do hope SOME random passerby takes a likin' to this~.
-Taha
Anyway, about the piece! It's a first person (a perspective that I suck horrendously at) meditative work done up at around 4:33 AM whilst being berated by my grandmother on why I'm still up. There's bound to be numerous homo phonic errors, but ah well~
I do hope SOME random passerby takes a likin' to this~.
-Taha
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 6.3 kB
I think you should have your own account, you're a big kitty 'n all.
Now onto this? I think it speaks for yourself. Your word choice is superb and your delivery is quite marvelous. I discovered all too late that I had lost myself in your skills, really you are great at this. As said before it is rather elegant, which can be a bit alienating from the general masses, but it is consumed and truly respected by those who can see its proper value. And you did this at 4:30 in the morning? I wonder how you flow when you have decent sleep and a more welcoming environment.
Kudos, big kudos all around, Kitty-Goop.
Now onto this? I think it speaks for yourself. Your word choice is superb and your delivery is quite marvelous. I discovered all too late that I had lost myself in your skills, really you are great at this. As said before it is rather elegant, which can be a bit alienating from the general masses, but it is consumed and truly respected by those who can see its proper value. And you did this at 4:30 in the morning? I wonder how you flow when you have decent sleep and a more welcoming environment.
Kudos, big kudos all around, Kitty-Goop.
For a fleeting and ephemeral span I found myself vexed and rendered then silent in adulation. So admirable is your sheer, unvarnished aptitude with the English language that I am accosted by my own shame, to a degree, for my comparatively primal diction. Save a few errors in grammar, and how funny it is for me to say this as for the most part am decidedly hateful of grammar, your impeccable vocabulary and sharp wit portray you a akin to some master paper bleeder of the past and something my English teacher would have us study. I will say, however, that my own eloquence is an agitation in it's superiority to numerous throngs of my local peers. I wish my fellows in general were possessed of a vocabulary a few rungs higher on the ladder and superseding their vernacular's deficiencies so that when I speak I need not descend into didactic elaboration upon semantics. What agitates me further is the ridicule with which I am affixed for my manner of speaking, which is not to an considerable magnitude severed from their own, but is despised by them as being a small degree above their comprehension. This however is not a clear reflection of all my peers and thankfully so there are embodiments of exception to such tiring ignorance, a number of whom I delight in calling dear acquaintances and others for whom I merely bear a great deal of respect. I believe it would come to you as no surprise that I have been treading upon the outermost limbs of this dendroid from I call my vocabulary. In utmost respect for your adroit abilities, I thought it prudent to prod my bounds and spur my intellectual side out of my regular state of abominable idleness. I relish any opportunity given to me that I may delay the wasting away of my mind and actually utilize it as I more oft should. "Oh frabjous day! Calooh! Calaay!// he chortled in his joy." I delight in this sublime anecdote which is a breath of fresh air from the the pornography that is of course one of my typical diversions on this site. You peddle yourself minisculely to say that you suck and this vignette is an indication of genius which is furthermore admirable when you consider this was written on the edge of the dawn, a time when I personally am to fried in cognition to compose any form of literature, save maybe a trite and inane haiku. I bow to you
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