Here's the finished version,
Made some changes since the w.i.p.
If you did enjoy it, let me know :3
and if you didn't, let me know why so I can improve my music :3
Made some changes since the w.i.p.
If you did enjoy it, let me know :3
and if you didn't, let me know why so I can improve my music :3
Category Music / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 3.15 MB
This is gorgeous, and I love the way it builds. You chose good instruments and a lovely chord progression and melody.
For my tastes the song is too repetitive, however. I would like it to be about the same length, but with one or two more melodic themes. Like, if one thinks of what you currently have as the verse, add a chorus and a bridge.
I know that many people who enjoy electronica also enjoy repetitive music, so I may not be your target audience. If so, I see no other problems with the piece. Personally, though, I like my electronica to contain more variety within each song. I hope that's helpful. The song is very well done.
For my tastes the song is too repetitive, however. I would like it to be about the same length, but with one or two more melodic themes. Like, if one thinks of what you currently have as the verse, add a chorus and a bridge.
I know that many people who enjoy electronica also enjoy repetitive music, so I may not be your target audience. If so, I see no other problems with the piece. Personally, though, I like my electronica to contain more variety within each song. I hope that's helpful. The song is very well done.
Thank you so much for your criticism, I rarely get comments like these and like to know exactly whats wrong with a tune like how you have described it.
I'm still learning and these comments help me to improve.
And I'm glad you liked the song how it is, I will be sure to improve with later projects :3
I'm still learning and these comments help me to improve.
And I'm glad you liked the song how it is, I will be sure to improve with later projects :3
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