Heheh, those are now my favorite curses.

Also, lovely, lovely job at the character interactions. :3

Ah yes, nothing like getting slightly hammered with the Royalty.

Bunners

Looking forward to the next part!

If I could some up this story/your writing in word it would be: Engrossing. You seriously know how to weave a tale that constantly begs for more attention. I sit around and think about your stories even after I have finished reading them. The characters are unique, the setting is surreal, and your descriptions are vivid. Your style reminds me a lot of the book Dune by Frank Herbert. Have you read that book? Anyways, just thought I would tell you as an aspiring writer, I admire your work. Looking forward to many many more!

i love how you show Shari's character as he interacts with others