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I thought it would be easier to post this as a separate deviation XD
I would REALLY appreciate some critique on this as a story. Is it interesting? Does it have gaps? Is it rushed? That sort of thing :3
And, of course, opinions and comments are always welcome and loved X3
I wrote this while listening to this song ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tlN1zAkyDK8 ) It's always made me think of Zane and really captures his mind and his thoughts.
You can see what Zane looks like here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7195432
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I would REALLY appreciate some critique on this as a story. Is it interesting? Does it have gaps? Is it rushed? That sort of thing :3
And, of course, opinions and comments are always welcome and loved X3
I wrote this while listening to this song ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tlN1zAkyDK8 ) It's always made me think of Zane and really captures his mind and his thoughts.
You can see what Zane looks like here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7195432
© Me
Category Story / All
Species Dog (Other)
Size 116 x 120px
File Size 13.3 kB
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