she looks pissed

Yeah, someone just interrupted her as she was about to see the ultimate future of the world and she is about to rip the heart out of the guy, as angry tigers sometimes do. ;)

OK, since you asked and I am happy to help make your work even better...her far arm looks way to short from shoulder to elbow! You need to either raise the shoulder or angel the elbow out more! Also, you might consider making the face more profile and not show any of the other side, it will look less odd I think and more natural. Hope these help!

Thanks again, you're right about the arm. I'll move the elbow back and farther away.
I am going to play with the face a little but she is turning the best she can to look behind her.

It looks as if she's turning to something behind her.

Is the piece around her neck supposed to dangle down her back (if she were standing)? Because it almost looks like the tail of a "Y" strap going the wrong way to the under-bust strap of a bra. (Well, there's no lower strap so I'm assuming it's really supposed to dangle.)

My anatomy is really weak, so I'm no help there.

I'm still playing with the strap. One piece goes around the neck, the other connects at the left side of the neck and raps around under right arm. I'm not happy with it and and going to try some other ways that would be more interesting and less confusing.

Any suggestions?

Thanks, I'm always open to suggestions.

I cheated and had someone pose for me to check anatomy. They couldn't twist quite that much but sure helped with shoulder placement and musculature.

I'm going to be doing a lot more pics like this and Nattaraexa. they're fun to do and reasonably quick. I don't normally do requests but if you have an idea of something you would like me to do, hit me with it.

Is that a shadow on the far side of her breast or a bit of cloth/covering? If the latter, how is it held in place?

Getting a model isn't cheating. In fact, a willing (and affordable) live model is invaluable to artists of all levels of skill. There are plenty of books filled with nothing but various poses available, too. Poser was originally created as a digital model for traditional artists to reference, not for the creation of CG art. By all means, reference and even study live models, both human an animal.

It is material on her breast but like the straps on her back it is probably going to change. I was trying to avoid the traditional strap across the back but I will probably go with one.

I will be starting color on this tonight and really fly on it this weekend.