iam hooked now i gotta know what happens next

awesome thanks. I am glad you are enjjoying it the next part will be up soon.

cant wait

Not much to say about this part other than: Well done. The shy protagonist is a person people can easily relate to and you gave him a nice plot in this chapter - and even managed to get a proper catch at the end of it. well done indeed. Just the first few sentences are hard to understand due to typos and/or wrong words. I am guessing here, but i assume it was you trying to get your inspiration together, eh?