I think it was a cute song. However, I do have a few quirks with the song. Please don't take this as insult, but perhaps constructive criticism. It sounded very mechanical. I know this was done on a computer and it is techo/electronica, but if you have ever listened to Darude or Paul van Dike, or some of the uber masters, even their stuff doesn't sound mechanical. The way to fix that is simple, play with the dynamic levels. Crechendo, Dimenuendo, all that jazz. Also, play around with the beat, a good place to start is in 4/4 time signature, but the beat doesn't have to be 1..2..3..4.. the entire song. Again, I really liked it, and hope you make more soon!

^.^ thank you. i really have no clue what you are talking about yet lol but i hope to soon find out ^.^

for your first music compilation this was very very good. Hopefully we hear more :D

^.^ thank you very much it really means alot coming from you ^.^