~ SKETCH

I'm trying to create more of these, but its really hard to get down the style I've been using, every time i post a sketch version like this, its a totally second copy, I draw it out once, don't like it, then draw it again, i don't know why, but it always looks better....hmmm...Story:

The boy protected his lover for so long, keeping him out of harms way for as long as he had known him, but one night when they were both asleep, the boy's lover got up from their bed, saying he was just going for a drink of water, a moment later the boy heard a scream, and glass smashing. The house had been broken into, and as the boy dashed out to see what was happening, the robber jumped out the window he came in, his lover on the kitchen floor, bleeding from a deep wound... ...A month later after the surgery and hospital time, the boy and lover sat on the couch, watching TV. The boy started to sob uncontrolably, before he could ask, the boy blurted out "I...couldn't protect you! I COULDN'T DO A DAMNED THING!" The lover pulled him into his chest, letting the tears flow, he then said "Do you really want to protect me no matter what? I may have a way..." The boy instantly rose his head from the comforting embrace, wiped his tears with his hands, and nodded silently, "Then follow me..." said the lover... ...and till this day the boy has been a loyal protector of his lover, his master, and he will for a long time...