Major experimentation with fur texture and shading. Am taking it slow and careful, adding layers as I go. Once BG is in I'll go back and add final detail and shading.The heavy fur about the neck and shoulders is something of a semi mane that raps around to her back.
Critique and advice welcome.
Partial shot of 11 x 17 color pencil
Critique and advice welcome.
Partial shot of 11 x 17 color pencil
Category All / All
Species Wolf
Size 960 x 1280px
File Size 140.2 kB
Looks good but I would go to a mirror and stick out your arm and check the forshortening on the outsteached arm here. Also, the breasts seem very low to me, but with anthros, it is sublective I guess! Layering is good, the more you build it up and the more you vary the color the more depth you get.
The hand does not look to small (but compare it to the other hand which should be smaller than the forward one), It seems to me the forarm is to thin compared to the upper arm when seen at this angle, but like I said, check it in a mirror to be sure, I could be wrong!
I did check out the arm some more in the monitor and did some comparisons and you're right and I was able to easily add thickness to the lower section of the forearm and it does look much better. I was also able to push her right breast up just a little to be noticeably higher but reworked the ruff to define the shoulder much better (and much lower). also defined her left shoulder and again it gave her much better proportions, the ruff also looks better broken up. Also thickened the left leg a bit as it got lower.
Thanks for the help. Will post again when wing and tail are done probably Tuesday. :)
Thanks for the help. Will post again when wing and tail are done probably Tuesday. :)
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