Sounding interesting so far. though your distortion is a little on the heavy side. try easing back on how much distortion you are using as the track progresses. You can start it out all grungy and distorted but as the track go's on reduce the distortion into a clearer bass line and don't drop you volume level for you bass so low as it was nearly inaudible below you melody line. I think you'd be able to turn this into something great!

moe bass?!?
yes!
have yet to work on progression that sounds like an awesome idea for it; thnx