This is the first song written by me, that i upload.
It's not finished yet.
And i still have to practice a lot.
You'll hear that i'm sometimes a bit out of tune and the my rythm is'nt perfect.
But this is just let's say... A beta version of the song.
It's just to give you an idea what it sounds like.
Tips and ideas are always welcome, especially for the lyrics. I want to improve my lyrics..
I like them, but i'm not very satishfied yet. I think it could be better
Lyrics:
It's night
It's a beautifull night.
One of the few of these times.
No place is safe
For me to hide.
Cause if they find me i have to fight.
Thousands died, the past few months.
And i might be next at the battlefront.
But i'm gonna leave.
Far away and overseas.
Just get away unoticed
And i'll be free.
I leave the war behind.
As they continue to fight.
I finally leave my land.
To get a second chance.
I'm gone.
Now i'm gone.
Away from this haunt.
My mind's still remembers.
The horrible pictures
from this fight.
But i Did leave.
Far away and overseas.
I got away unoticed.
And now i'm free.
I leave the war behind.
As they continue to fight.
I finally leave my land.
To get a second chance.
I leave the war behind.
As they continue to fight.
I finally leave my land.
To get a second chance.
It's night
It's a beautifull night.
One of the few of these times.
But now
I have a new life.
And now the rest of my life, will be great.
But never, these memories will fade.
It's not finished yet.
And i still have to practice a lot.
You'll hear that i'm sometimes a bit out of tune and the my rythm is'nt perfect.
But this is just let's say... A beta version of the song.
It's just to give you an idea what it sounds like.
Tips and ideas are always welcome, especially for the lyrics. I want to improve my lyrics..
I like them, but i'm not very satishfied yet. I think it could be better
Lyrics:
It's night
It's a beautifull night.
One of the few of these times.
No place is safe
For me to hide.
Cause if they find me i have to fight.
Thousands died, the past few months.
And i might be next at the battlefront.
But i'm gonna leave.
Far away and overseas.
Just get away unoticed
And i'll be free.
I leave the war behind.
As they continue to fight.
I finally leave my land.
To get a second chance.
I'm gone.
Now i'm gone.
Away from this haunt.
My mind's still remembers.
The horrible pictures
from this fight.
But i Did leave.
Far away and overseas.
I got away unoticed.
And now i'm free.
I leave the war behind.
As they continue to fight.
I finally leave my land.
To get a second chance.
I leave the war behind.
As they continue to fight.
I finally leave my land.
To get a second chance.
It's night
It's a beautifull night.
One of the few of these times.
But now
I have a new life.
And now the rest of my life, will be great.
But never, these memories will fade.
Category Music / Other Music
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 80px
File Size 9.55 MB
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